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Re: News article feedback « Reply #105 on: September 18, 2009, 10:11 PM »
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Allan, I edited that part of your report so Neil's copy is not the exact one that you wrote. Regardless, I still think there was a mistake in there and once I thought I had corrected it, Neil pointed out that my correction was also a mistake lol
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Re: News article feedback « Reply #106 on: September 19, 2009, 12:44 PM »
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Murray was expected to team up with Ross Hutchins on Saturday, starting at 2:30pm UK time, to face the strong pairing of Marcin Matkowski and Mariusz Fyrstenberg in the doubles.

Not sure you need the starting at 2:30pm UK time in the middle of that sentence. This might be better...?

Murray was expected to team up with Ross Hutchins to face the strong pairing of Marcin Matkowski and Mariusz Fyrstenberg in the doubles on Saturday. The match is scheduled to start at 2.30pm UK time.
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Re: News article feedback « Reply #107 on: September 19, 2009, 01:08 PM »
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Either works to be honest, it's just a matter of preference.
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Re: News article feedback « Reply #108 on: September 20, 2009, 10:11 AM »
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The first one doesn't work, to be honest. It's just a matter of good sentence construction.
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Re: News article feedback « Reply #109 on: September 20, 2009, 10:22 AM »
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Just some suggestions...feel free to ignore Smile

Andy Murray decided to play through the pain of his wrist injury today by pairing up with Ross Hutchins in the doubles rubber .

However the Scot's involvement failed to stop Poland taking a four set win. Mariusz Fyrstenberg and Marcin Matkowski beat Murray and Hutchins 7-5 3-6 6-3 6-2.

Great Britain must now win the final two singles matches on Sunday or face relegation to Group Two.
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Re: News article feedback « Reply #110 on: September 20, 2009, 10:14 PM »
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The first one doesn't work, to be honest. It's just a matter of good sentence construction.

Either works.
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Re: News article feedback « Reply #111 on: September 21, 2009, 09:11 AM »
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However, it doesn't read well.
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Re: News article feedback « Reply #112 on: September 22, 2009, 12:28 AM »
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I love however, so much more positive than but.  Whistle
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Re: News article feedback « Reply #113 on: September 22, 2009, 05:21 PM »
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However, it doesn't read as well.

And I'd agree.
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Re: News article feedback « Reply #114 on: September 22, 2009, 08:24 PM »
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I love however, so much more positive than but.  Whistle
however comma ...... even more interesting ... Whistle
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Re: News article feedback « Reply #115 on: September 24, 2009, 06:39 PM »
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Stationery with an 'e' please Smile With an 'a' means not moving...I'm yet to see a shop sprout legs (though believe me I'm waiting for that day!)
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Re: News article feedback « Reply #116 on: September 24, 2009, 06:40 PM »
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Thanks, that spelling mistake was copied over from the email sent by 19 Entertainment.
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Re: News article feedback « Reply #117 on: September 24, 2009, 06:42 PM »
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Stationery with an 'e' please Smile With an 'a' means not moving...I'm yet to see a shop sprout legs (though believe me I'm waiting for that day!)
SPELLING POLICE ALERT!!  lol

The only way I remember the difference between the two is to think of 'car' which has an 'a' and to think of it being parked.....  search me
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Re: News article feedback « Reply #118 on: September 24, 2009, 06:42 PM »
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Ooooo that's pretty poor form on their part...
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Re: News article feedback « Reply #119 on: September 24, 2009, 06:43 PM »
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They should be absolutely disgusted with themselves lmao
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