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Re: News article feedback « Reply #90 on: September 11, 2009, 03:15 PM »
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*fighting grammar Nazi urges*
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Re: News article feedback « Reply #91 on: September 11, 2009, 03:20 PM »
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*fighting grammar Nazi urges*

Which article are you referring to? I haven't really read them. Pass on your suggestions, if you wish.
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Re: News article feedback « Reply #92 on: September 11, 2009, 03:27 PM »
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Not the article, one of the comments. As if I would ever doubt your grammatical abilities, James!!! Wink
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Re: News article feedback « Reply #93 on: September 11, 2009, 03:30 PM »
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Not the article, one of the comments. As if I would ever doubt your grammatical abilities, James!!! Wink

I didn't write the articles, so I don't know if someone made a mistake.

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Re: News article feedback « Reply #94 on: September 11, 2009, 03:31 PM »
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Have a look...
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Re: News article feedback « Reply #95 on: September 18, 2009, 07:24 PM »
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Grammatical errors galore in the article on the davis cup.... Can I re-write it? lol No offence allan, but seems very very rushed.
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Re: News article feedback « Reply #96 on: September 18, 2009, 07:27 PM »
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Currently.... (changes highlighted)
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Great Britain and Poland are tied at 1-1 after the first day's play at the Echo Arena in Liverpool.

Andy Murray opened up the day with a comfortable victory over 6-4 6-2 6-4 over Michal Przysiezny, this is despite Murray not being at his best and Przysiezny playing better than his ranking suggests.

Next up was the battle of the teenagers, Dan Evans, 19, and Jerzy Janowicz, 18. The 6' 6" Pole was a comfortable victor in this match winning 6-3, 6-3 7-6(5).

Tommorow, Murray will team up for the doubles, starting at 2:30pm UK time, with Ross Hutchins to face the strong pairing of Marcin Matkowski and Mariusz Fyrstenberg.


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Great Britain and Poland are tied at 1-1 after the first day's play at the Echo Arena in Liverpool.

Andy Murray opened up the day with a comfortable 6-4 6-2 6-4 over Michal Przysiezny, despite Murray not being at his best and Przysiezny playing better than his ranking suggests.

Next up was the battle of the teenagers, Dan Evans, 19, and Jerzy Janowicz, 18. The 6' 6" Pole was a comfortable victor in this match winning 6-3 6-3 7-6(5).

Tommorrow, Murray will team up with Ross Hutchins for the doubles, starting at 2:30pm UK time, to face the strong pairing of Marcin Matkowski and Mariusz Fyrstenberg.
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Re: News article feedback « Reply #97 on: September 18, 2009, 07:36 PM »
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Murray isn't likely to play in the doubles either, depends on his wrist. Poor information guys :P


Mod NoticeMoved from news article.
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Re: News article feedback « Reply #98 on: September 18, 2009, 07:52 PM »
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Cheers and btw, don't see the problem with "this is despite"?

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Re: News article feedback « Reply #99 on: September 18, 2009, 08:00 PM »
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Andy Murray opened up the day with a comfortable 6-4 6-2 6-4 victory over Michal Przysiezny, despite Murray not being at his best and Przysiezny playing better than his ranking suggests.


You have victory missing.


Sorry, just noticed the missing R, didn't even clock the two m's
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Re: News article feedback « Reply #100 on: September 18, 2009, 08:01 PM »
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Cheers and btw, don't see the problem with "this is despite"?

Because it has a comma and doesn't flow properly. Either full stop and "This is ..." or  ", despite" Smile
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Re: News article feedback « Reply #101 on: September 18, 2009, 08:02 PM »
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Fair enough... changed the article completely now Murray might pull out.
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Re: News article feedback « Reply #102 on: September 18, 2009, 08:03 PM »
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Fair enough... changed the article completely now Murray might pull out.

So I see Smile
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Re: News article feedback « Reply #103 on: September 18, 2009, 09:26 PM »
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Because it has a comma and doesn't flow properly. Either full stop and "This is ..." or  ", despite" Smile
I was intending to have it with a full stop and a capital at the word 'this', but somehow it didn't happen.....
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Re: News article feedback « Reply #104 on: September 18, 2009, 10:02 PM »
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Allan, I edited that part of your report so Neil's copy is not the exact one that you wrote. Regardless, I still think there was a mistake in there and once I thought I had corrected it, Neil pointed out that my correction was also a mistake lol
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