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Re: News article feedback « Reply #270 on: August 08, 2010, 07:18 PM »
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Ok, I see what you mean now - it would make sense as a follow up article to something else yes
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Re: News article feedback « Reply #271 on: August 08, 2010, 07:59 PM »
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Yeah, I was worried that without the 'still' some people would read it and say, "Er, this website thinks this is news? We already knew he was waiting after US Open".

It's not ideal I know but don't know of a better alternative.
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Re: News article feedback « Reply #272 on: August 08, 2010, 08:43 PM »
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I've made an edit, hopefully this makes things clearer for the reader:

Andy Murray has received several coaching proposals since firing Miles Maclagan but he will stick by his original intentions of defering a decision until after the US Open.
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Re: News article feedback « Reply #273 on: August 08, 2010, 08:57 PM »
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Looks good to me!! yes
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Re: News article feedback « Reply #274 on: August 08, 2010, 09:01 PM »
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Btw, it's deferring, not defering.
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Re: News article feedback « Reply #275 on: August 08, 2010, 09:41 PM »
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You're part of the news team, you're meant to correct it yourself.
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Re: News article feedback « Reply #276 on: August 08, 2010, 11:20 PM »
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You're part of the news team, you're meant to be able to spell properly.

Oh yeah, that felt good.
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Re: News article feedback « Reply #277 on: August 08, 2010, 11:22 PM »
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You're part of the news team, you're meant to be able to spell properly.

Oh yeah, that felt good.
Is Mark in a strop because he's getting old?   lmao
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Re: News article feedback « Reply #278 on: August 08, 2010, 11:23 PM »
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Catty! Keep going, birthday men.
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Re: News article feedback « Reply #279 on: August 09, 2010, 07:33 AM »
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You're part of the news team,
I'm not though, I write news reports when the team haven't picked up a story or are not available and therefore not doing their job properly. Wink
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Re: News article feedback « Reply #280 on: October 28, 2010, 09:59 PM »
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Jamie marries fiancee, mebs? It's just picky picky - no real need to change it Smile
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Re: News article feedback « Reply #281 on: October 28, 2010, 09:59 PM »
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Just copied the headline from BBC.
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Re: News article feedback « Reply #282 on: January 10, 2011, 11:05 AM »
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Didn't know you were going to make it a news article, Mark, so I just edited it to make it slightly clearer (I think!), so the word count may be out...
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Re: News article feedback « Reply #283 on: January 10, 2011, 11:07 AM »
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Thanks Smile
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Re: News article feedback « Reply #284 on: April 14, 2011, 05:12 PM »
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where the write-up?
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