Andy Murray vs Joao Sousa, Thursday, Estimated time - 3:30pm BST - Discuss the match
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Ok, I see what you mean now - it would make sense as a follow up article to something else yes
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Yeah, I was worried that without the 'still' some people would read it and say, "Er, this website thinks this is news? We already knew he was waiting after US Open".

It's not ideal I know but don't know of a better alternative.
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I've made an edit, hopefully this makes things clearer for the reader:

Andy Murray has received several coaching proposals since firing Miles Maclagan but he will stick by his original intentions of defering a decision until after the US Open.
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Looks good to me!! yes
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Btw, it's deferring, not defering.
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You're part of the news team, you're meant to correct it yourself.
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You're part of the news team, you're meant to be able to spell properly.

Oh yeah, that felt good.
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You're part of the news team, you're meant to be able to spell properly.

Oh yeah, that felt good.
Is Mark in a strop because he's getting old?   lmao
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Catty! Keep going, birthday men.
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You're part of the news team,
I'm not though, I write news reports when the team haven't picked up a story or are not available and therefore not doing their job properly. Wink
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Jamie marries fiancee, mebs? It's just picky picky - no real need to change it Smile
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Just copied the headline from BBC.
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Didn't know you were going to make it a news article, Mark, so I just edited it to make it slightly clearer (I think!), so the word count may be out...
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Thanks Smile
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where the write-up?
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