Mark, as far as I can see the changes I suggested the other day havent been made!! I'll post them up here again
An extra m has snuck its way onto the end of 'rhythm' and tomorrows in the first paragraph needs an apostrophe.
(I know this shouldn't strictly be here, it's a one off I promise, I'm still a little confused by the last sentence of the second paragraph, but might just be me being stupid
Great article Andrew - I particularly enjoy the swagger and panache. Sexy.